Saturday, December 4, 2010

THE MYSTERY




This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 17; the seventeenth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.


Memories of her good times,
Creeping all over her mind,
Searching for a reason to smile.
Walking along the lonely lane,
Fighting with the tears,
She was attracting sorrow and fears.
Unable to handle problems of life,
She cut her nerves with a knife.
No one knew what made her do so,
Neither friends nor family knew her history,
And for them its still their life's MYSTERY.


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31 comments:

Ms Clouds said...
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Someone is Special said...

What happened to here? Mystery at its best.. All the Best for BAT..

Stop by,Someone is Special - The Mysery

--Someone is Special--

Rumya said...

Short and some mysteries remain unsolved forever.
All the Best for BAT 17.

Ms Clouds said...

@Someone is special and Rumya:well....thnx for ur wishes..:)

adarshs said...

this one stung...short n to the point...gud work

MuddassirShah said...

Neither friends nor family knew her history,
And for them its still their life's MYSTERY.

Megha,
lovely :)
a very good poem
all the best for BATOM

Ms Clouds said...

@adarshs n Md.Muddassir Shah:thank u both for ur wishes....:)

Lost in thoughts said...

Good poem...Depression pulls you down..
All the best!

Vibhuti Bhandarkar said...

You have written a sad story through poetry. Is this of a person you knew?
Because I have a friend whose sad and mysterious demise will never leave my memory!
Do visit
http://klishmaklaver.blogspot.com/2010/02/unheard.html
All the best for BAT 17

Ms Clouds said...

@Lost in thoughts:hey thnx....:)

Ms Clouds said...

@Vibhuti B:well,ya though its a sad story but its not of any person i know.its a story of my imaginative world.....:)
will surely see d link dat u had given.keep landing...:)

Dr. Pratibha Singh said...

so much said in few lines.great poem and all the best for BAT.

Beyond Horizon said...

sadness n depression..takes one 2 a path of darkness...few lines expressed a life s mystery
Best of luck 4 BAT :)

Ms Clouds said...

@Pratibha and Beyond horizon:thank u so much for all ur wishes....:)

Kshitij KK Khurana said...

Nice... and so you are keeping it a mystery for your readers as well.

Your blog's nice... didn't like the quotes thing though... found them to be too serious types ...

Maddie said...

Ahh and it ends with a mystery still!

All the best!

Ms Clouds said...

@Kshitij and Maddie:ya its a mystery for readers too....:)
thnx for ur wishes.

aativas said...

Sad .. but it keep on happening to people.. and the living have to grapple with the mystery!

Ms Clouds said...

@aativas:ya very truely said...

Yamini Meduri said...

a short mystery...thats seems to be unsolved forever..!!

All the best for BAT dear..!!!

Yamini Meduri - The Mystery

Yours
Yamini Meduri

Ms Clouds said...

@yamini:ya....an unsolved mystery.thnx for ur wishes....gud luck to u too....:)

Makk said...

Well, Its more suitable for title Stupidity rather then mystery.

Keep writing.

Its nice to see you growing in writing style.

keep Smiling.

Srikanth said...

reminds me of a death of someone close to me.. Gud post

Ms Clouds said...

@makk:well in wat sense u felt stupidity,i dont know...but surely will improve more n more...:)

Ms Clouds said...

@Srikanth:well,i m sorry for dat...but thnx for compliments....

Insignia said...

All the best. Mystery indeed. But such decision are really really stupid isnt it

Ms Clouds said...

@Insignia:ya u r right....but loneliness makes it all....

Sh@s said...

Short and sweet. Beautifully penned.

Ms Clouds said...

@Shas:thank u.......:)

Megha said...

hmmm nice...will there b a sequel? what's the mystery?

Ms Clouds said...

@Megha:well,as of now not thinking of any sequel to it,but will surely think abt it....n its mystery is a mystery to all d readers too...:)