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Memories of her good times,
Creeping all over her mind,
Searching for a reason to smile.
Walking along the lonely lane,
Fighting with the tears,
She was attracting sorrow and fears.
Unable to handle problems of life,
She cut her nerves with a knife.
No one knew what made her do so,
Neither friends nor family knew her history,
And for them its still their life's MYSTERY.
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31 comments:
What happened to here? Mystery at its best.. All the Best for BAT..
Stop by,Someone is Special - The Mysery
--Someone is Special--
Short and some mysteries remain unsolved forever.
All the Best for BAT 17.
@Someone is special and Rumya:well....thnx for ur wishes..:)
this one stung...short n to the point...gud work
Neither friends nor family knew her history,
And for them its still their life's MYSTERY.
Megha,
lovely :)
a very good poem
all the best for BATOM
@adarshs n Md.Muddassir Shah:thank u both for ur wishes....:)
Good poem...Depression pulls you down..
All the best!
You have written a sad story through poetry. Is this of a person you knew?
Because I have a friend whose sad and mysterious demise will never leave my memory!
Do visit
http://klishmaklaver.blogspot.com/2010/02/unheard.html
All the best for BAT 17
@Lost in thoughts:hey thnx....:)
@Vibhuti B:well,ya though its a sad story but its not of any person i know.its a story of my imaginative world.....:)
will surely see d link dat u had given.keep landing...:)
so much said in few lines.great poem and all the best for BAT.
sadness n depression..takes one 2 a path of darkness...few lines expressed a life s mystery
Best of luck 4 BAT :)
@Pratibha and Beyond horizon:thank u so much for all ur wishes....:)
Nice... and so you are keeping it a mystery for your readers as well.
Your blog's nice... didn't like the quotes thing though... found them to be too serious types ...
Ahh and it ends with a mystery still!
All the best!
@Kshitij and Maddie:ya its a mystery for readers too....:)
thnx for ur wishes.
Sad .. but it keep on happening to people.. and the living have to grapple with the mystery!
@aativas:ya very truely said...
a short mystery...thats seems to be unsolved forever..!!
All the best for BAT dear..!!!
Yamini Meduri - The Mystery
Yours
Yamini Meduri
@yamini:ya....an unsolved mystery.thnx for ur wishes....gud luck to u too....:)
Well, Its more suitable for title Stupidity rather then mystery.
Keep writing.
Its nice to see you growing in writing style.
keep Smiling.
reminds me of a death of someone close to me.. Gud post
@makk:well in wat sense u felt stupidity,i dont know...but surely will improve more n more...:)
@Srikanth:well,i m sorry for dat...but thnx for compliments....
All the best. Mystery indeed. But such decision are really really stupid isnt it
@Insignia:ya u r right....but loneliness makes it all....
Short and sweet. Beautifully penned.
@Shas:thank u.......:)
hmmm nice...will there b a sequel? what's the mystery?
@Megha:well,as of now not thinking of any sequel to it,but will surely think abt it....n its mystery is a mystery to all d readers too...:)
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