Never be in company with the sailor,
One day he will leave you at the shore,
And say 'goodbye'
Never be in company with d pilot,
One day he will leave you at the airport,
And wave a 'goodbye'
Never have too much liking for nature,
Every sunset makes an end to a day,
Making us say 'goodbye'
Never hold too tight a flower,
It will leave its smell and crush itself,
Saying you 'goodbye'
Never be too close to a friend,
One day he will break all relations,
Leaving u alone with loneliness,
With a silent 'goodbye'
Never love your love extensively,
As it meets to death one day,
And goes away to heaven,
Forever saying u 'goodbye'
Always be in strong touch with your eternal soul,
As it is the only one,always gonna be with you,
Never saying you a 'goodbye'
One day he will leave you at the shore,
And say 'goodbye'
Never be in company with d pilot,
One day he will leave you at the airport,
And wave a 'goodbye'
Never have too much liking for nature,
Every sunset makes an end to a day,
Making us say 'goodbye'
Never hold too tight a flower,
It will leave its smell and crush itself,
Saying you 'goodbye'
Never be too close to a friend,
One day he will break all relations,
Leaving u alone with loneliness,
With a silent 'goodbye'
Never love your love extensively,
As it meets to death one day,
And goes away to heaven,
Forever saying u 'goodbye'
Always be in strong touch with your eternal soul,
As it is the only one,always gonna be with you,
Never saying you a 'goodbye'
7 comments:
It seems you are becoming wiser day by day.
Nice work
:)..Keep Writing ...Keep Smiling...
thnx n m glad ki u liked it.....:)
Wow! If everyone of us realize this.....sigh!
ya....then this world would hv been different..:)
ery nice poem.
Has a message to give :)
Never be in company with d pilot,
One day he will leave you at the airport,
And wave a 'goodbye'
The sailor thing sounds quite good, natural as you can say... but pilot sounds little contemporary and doesn't give that classic feel..
Never hold too tight a flower,
It will leave its smell and crush itself,
Saying you 'goodbye'..
crushed flowers also smell :)
I certainly liked the ending....love yoursel :)
yes u r right about d lines on pilot.but i couldnt find anything else n wanted to write more examples,dats why......:)
Crushed flowers also smell,but not for much longer time....:)
well,there r some things i need to learn while writing.will be better soon......:)
Hmm... Just keep faith in yourself and almighty and keep writing, that's the only way to improve :)
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