This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 27; the 27th Edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The topic for this month is 'Once Again'.
Loneliness prevailed him all over,
Each day was more depressing.
His dreams were turned into darkness,
When God took his love away from him.
The only thing he lived with,
Was the memories of the past.
But soon his life made a U-turn,
Things started to change,
When love Once Again,
Knocked the doors of his heart.
She brought him back to life,
Drawing the dreams of his future wife.
Holding her in his arms,
Breathing the fragrance of each other,
Lost in their dreamy world.
But soon there was a steep turn,
Back again in his life.
Some things didn't work well,
Argument n fights overtook d love between them.
His Heart broke,
Whose shattered pieces never ever again made up.
One Again God was cruel to him,
Making an innocent soul's life more dim.
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11 comments:
Nice read :)
By, Kappu
The sorrow is well captured.
Very good choice of words I sadness is put across well, I was hoping for a happy ending but it turn out but having said that it still made for an interesting read :)
perfect blend of poetry and sorrow.Your contrast can be compared to Shakespear and Sanjay Leela Bhansali stories..:) :)
nice poem. very eloquent. the pain and the unfortunate situation of the guy's fate is expressed very well :)
Hmm a nice sweet yet touching post you have there. All the very best .
@ashish,kappu,aativas,Kriti,Maverick: thnx everyone. glad u'll liked my post. keep landing.
@Harsha:not all stories make a happy ending n i believe in reality....:)
@vajra: its a big compliment for me to have such comparisons ! thanks ...:)
Touching poem !
@Dewdrop: :)
It is interesting to see the positive as well as the negative twist because all does not have to be rosy yet it can be.
Life will often surprise us.
I liked how the poem was simple and to the point.
Powerful words. Made my heart ache though.
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