This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 20; the twentieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.
Sky covered with dark clouds,
Cool breeze flowing around,
Rains wetting the ground,
Heaven seems to be all round.
Just clearing the window panes,
Sitting inside her car,
So as to find the better view,
Seemed very lame to her.
Running out of her car,
Dancing under the sky,
She couldn't control herself,
From losing all her vain.
Spreading her arms wide,
Feeling all the rain,
She considered it as God's blessings,
As he takes back all her pain.
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Credits
Image - Window Rain Drops by Eric Alder
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10 comments:
Simple, beautiful and nicely written :) I think the picture suits your template and title well too.
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Hey its a nice poem....
Ah! sure its a bliss to dance in the rains and forget all the pain :)
Nice Read!
Take Care.
Awww... Beautiful Poem.. I always have a soft corner for Poems.. This is awesome..
I would have been much more happier if you would have posted an image of a girl streching her arms in the rain..
And am sure it is a blissful evening.. You rock.. Following you from now on for blessing this awesome poem for us..
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Totally does justice to the picture. Lovely poem, put very simply. Nice work.
All the best for BAT.
what a lovely ending ! hope he rains to take away all the pains and cools us down :D
@Leo:ya u are right,its just coincidence.... n thnx....:)
@Fatima:thank u dear.....:)
@Sis:oh my,so many compliments!
n ya i would have uploaded such kind of pic what u said,but it was rule to put up this pic na,so...n thank u.
@D2 n UmaAnadane:thanks both....:)
Beautiful. Those tiny droplets are magical. It is always successful in lifting our spirits :)
you can feel difference in your writing your self. if you go through your first creation and this one.
and refreshment of droplet has been felt in your words.
@Sh@s:thnx n ya true said......:)
@makk:thnx for making me aware of d difference in my writings,i hope it gets more n more improved.....:)
yeah i agree simple and beautiful
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