Monday, December 28, 2009

HEAVENLY FEELING


Exicted,Nervous,Impatient,Confused,
All these were running inside me,
Few hours before seeing him.
But all these emotions were replaced,
By loads n tons of happinezz,
When my skin felt,
The touch of his hands.
I can just say that,
I was on Cloud Nine!
A huge smile on my face,
With loss of words to speak.
Nervous veins,numb mind,
Such was my situation,
As things started to unwind.
Holding his hands,
Looking into his eyes,
Walking down the lane,
Feeling myself in vain
Hours went by so fast,
Like each hour was just a minute past.
Pushing my hairs behind by his hands,
He just kissed me on my cheek,
Like a fairy with a wand,
Did some magik on a geek.
Sitting by the sea-shore,
Looking at the sunsent,
Beautiful was the feeling,
Like all the wounds of life healing
Then came the time,
Which brought the end of our meet.
I felt my heart dying,
And my eyes were crying
But these sad feelings,
Was just a little part of my joy.
Which was quickly overcomed,
By a large curve on my face,
Just when I thought,
About our another meet,
Which future has stored in our case.

4 comments:

Khushboo Lakhani said...

this thg is too much close to my hrt... i think it wl be surely appropriate for me to say tht my feelings are turned into words by dis sweet little girl.. n my nice fren (hope so).. :P

Manish said...

Good Start, it has complete dictionary of emotions! good work and word!

Ms Clouds said...

@khushboo:definately we r nice frds.ok...n thnx.
@manish:thank u...:)

Makk said...

emotions reeling in the air
what ever those, mean or fair

all Satan, can say to human
keep smiling & be happy forever!







you have been in gr8888 spirits.

and coincidentally...my blog around the same time is sort of namesake of your blog. may be you didn't notice.

though i have written for a lot more things then you.